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The Bag by ~sivrel:iconsivrel:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Humor > Open


I know the liter has a bag,
And I found one full of rag,
So releived I lift leg and piss,
And I admit I felt great bliss.
©2008 ~sivrel
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Pardon the suddeness of this submission. I don't know if its funny but I sure hope it is. Like my other funny deviation this is another one from the top of my head. To be honest this was from the perspective of the cat who peed in my the bag full of my mom's new scrunchies as was mentioned in my journal.
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~spastica234:iconspastica234: May 3, 2008, 5:37:22 PM
Very, very random....

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Some gang! A horse-ranch lndian, a drunken gunfighter, a sex maniac...and an uncle!
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Seat belts are not as confining as wheelchairs.
~sivrel:iconsivrel: May 3, 2008, 5:46:51 PM
Of course at most the inspiration for this poem was like... five minuites old at the time.
~spastica234:iconspastica234: May 3, 2008, 6:03:26 PM
Lol, I see!

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Some gang! A horse-ranch lndian, a drunken gunfighter, a sex maniac...and an uncle!
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Seat belts are not as confining as wheelchairs.
~sivrel:iconsivrel: May 3, 2008, 7:12:11 PM
Yeah, I was inspired by the bladder of one of my cats.
~spastica234:iconspastica234: May 3, 2008, 7:20:51 PM
Lol, so I read...ewww....cat pee smells abnormally gross.....

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Some gang! A horse-ranch lndian, a drunken gunfighter, a sex maniac...and an uncle!
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Seat belts are not as confining as wheelchairs.
~sivrel:iconsivrel: May 3, 2008, 7:34:37 PM
I kknow I've smelled.
~spastica234:iconspastica234: May 3, 2008, 7:51:14 PM
Lol, when I was little I got peed on by an old cat...it was miserable....

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Some gang! A horse-ranch lndian, a drunken gunfighter, a sex maniac...and an uncle!
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Seat belts are not as confining as wheelchairs.
~G-N-RGirl:iconG-N-RGirl: May 4, 2008, 7:58:43 AM
Random, but funny!

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Yeah, straight up from the text book boy!
~sivrel:iconsivrel: May 4, 2008, 8:16:35 AM
Would you beleive this is my second serious attempt at poetry outside of school?
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